TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Controversy exists over whether workers do different tasks during a workday or not. Although some may hold this opinion that they just do similar tasks all day long, I, in the opposite, concur with this view that they are more satisfied when they have different types of tasks. The following substantiate the most outstanding reasons.

The first reason striking my mind is that, they are more motivated and engaged on their tasks. For example, when someone takes on different responsibilities, he tries to do his task without any defect because he wants to stand out from the crowd and sedt himself from others. In this way, he will have more chance to get promotion in his job.

Secondly, doing one single task may lead to being bored to tears because there is no difference between each day of work. In other words, all those people doing the same task everyday, you can find a sense of complain about their job and their only reason to keep working is their financial problems. However, when you do different task during a day, you are over the moon and look forward to beginning the next day.

Last but not least when it comes to having different task, the first thing which cross your mind is communicating with more people meaning a larger social network. Moreover, all those people who have this condition are more happier than others and always find themselves please. To make it clear, consider those people around you that are one-track mind. These people are usually sad about thing which happen to them, but if interact with people who cover all aspects of their life, you will find that they are always happy.

Due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that doing different types of tasks is better than doing only one single. Partipation of being more motivated more happier more interactive with people are three prime and conspicuous support.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s, all those people doing the same task everyday, you can find a sense of complain about...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 220, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...hose people who have this condition are more happier than others and always find themselves ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 170, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...le. Partipation of being more motivated more happier more interactive with people are three ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94427244582 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38059358046 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9095172038 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412794118113 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134856294327 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104763471788 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243424757877 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109233373996 0.0645574589148 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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