There is no need to explain that these days parents are up to their eyes in works. So, they will try to make it up to their children when it comes to free time. Some of them try to have great times with them by playing games while others help them in doing their schoolworks. I personally prefer the first one. In this essay I will look at some reasons for what I think.
The first and foremost reason is that parents can crave great memories in their children's mind by playing with them. In our family album the most pictures taking are about this period because most of them engrave on our minds like a tattoo. For example, we all keep our toys in our closet because they jog your memory our childhood.
Secondly,we can not turn a blind eye to the psyche part of playing games with children. Children who spend more time with their parents are more happier and sociable. So, it is better to think twice when your child ask you to play with them. For example, it really help to develope both social and self-control skill sets. In this way, it can pave the way for growing some skills which can lead to great success in the future.
Thirdly, parents can teach so many things to their children which is impossible in normal condition. So, this can be considered as an indirect benefits of playing with their children. For instance, if they find out that their counterpart is cheating during their game, how to express their complain in a polite way. Furthermore, playing with them will be like lever to push them to forward.
Due to aforementioned ground,all folk should bear in mind that playing with children have some indirect effects that can not be dismissed. Participation of craving great memories, special psychological effects and teaching valuable things which will come in handy in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ur memory our childhood. Secondly,we can not turn a blind eye to the psyche ...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
... spend more time with their parents are more happier and sociable. So, it is better to think...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... play with them. For example, it really help to develope both social and self-contro...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
..., this can be considered as an indirect benefits of playing with their children. For ins...
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Line 13, column 300, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eir game, how to express their complain in a polite way. Furthermore, playing with them will be...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...d. Due to aforementioned ground,all folk should bear in mind that playing w...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...aluable things which will come in handy in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.721875 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39643085846 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6918394576 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5263157895 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208752653964 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697764166512 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678357818961 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123607165194 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647756685916 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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