TPO-42 - Independent Writing TaskWorkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Organizations and factory managers are searching for applaying most applicable principles and strategies to better the efficiency of workers. While some clients believe that being single task is more better others defend that engaging in different task during the workday might result in most efficiency. I agree with the latter statement and elaborate on my viewpoint as follow.
First, as some recenty researches shows, having a wide-rage tasks and even having some fun in workplaces poses a better environment for everyday workers. Based on mentioned research's evidences, it will provide a space for emerging creativity and motivation if the workers was not had to do repetitive and boring activites at a long time.
Second, the more task they undertake the more possibilities of being satisfied. In other words, if we equal the tasks with responsibilites; the workers feel they are more capable of doing diverse activities in an organization and as a result feel more self-confident. These sense of self-confidence illustrate the major factor in job satisfaction between workers.
In sum; as different tasks totally could have a positive impact on mental and sprital condition of workers; it is reasonable to do so. It is why I agree with the second suggestion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es to better the efficiency of workers. While some clients believe that being single ...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ients believe that being single task is more better others defend that engaging in differen...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...statement and elaborate on my viewpoint as follow. First, as some recenty researches sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28217821782 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11505746047 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5983905301 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217006113947 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771710561932 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731583404834 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12544848909 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330589423355 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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