Essay topics:
TPO 43-
The lecture and the text have opposing viewpoint about evidences of Agnosites fossils recently found. while reading attemp to make a relation between Agnosites and three type of livinig theories; the professor reflect weakness of these statement.
for one, she draw on the size and low development of Agnosites eyesight which is in contrast to what the text believes free-swimming predators expected to have. Next, they can not be considered as seefloor dwelled, since, Agnosied found in large areas which is not correlated to this types of seefloor creatures. And finally, feeding by larger insects or other spicies require to destroying larger population that has not enough witnesses yey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...es of Agnosites fossils recently found. while reading attemp to make a relation betwe...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ries; the professor reflect weakness of these statement. for one, she draw on the size and low...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r reflect weakness of these statement. for one, she draw on the size and low devel...
^^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'draws'.
Suggestion: draws
...kness of these statement. for one, she draw on the size and low development of Agno...
^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... large areas which is not correlated to this types of seefloor creatures. And finall...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, well, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 1373.03311258 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 270.72406181 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35779816514 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.04702891845 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73012478623 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 145.348785872 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.770642201835 0.540411800872 143% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 419.366225166 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5854317419 49.2860985944 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.8 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138959069142 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666353557357 0.0996497079465 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263055677564 0.0662205650399 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100434044744 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234468232477 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.42419426049 121% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 63.6247240618 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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