We spend more time at the work than everywhere else, and this makes our job either a source of joy for us, or a reason of our unhappiness. In this regard, personally, I am prone to belief that we are satisfied with our job only in case if it implies doing different things. I hold this opinion since the lack of diversity makes the work boring; and does not guarantee professional growth.
To begin with, repetition in our actions and behavior at work leads to our dissatisfaction. This is explained by the fact that we are curious creatures who always seek for something new to learn. The absence of novelty in any sphere, and, in particular, in our daily obligations, cannot bring to positive feelings. For example, I am a legal practitioner, and I work in a law firm. We deal with legal cases of citizens and entities in various spheres, such as family law, company law, restitution law, and so on. There is a principle in the organization of the work of our company, according to which, each lawyer has his or her area of specialty. In practice the latter means that each of the staff members acts only in one legal area, and, therefore, we practically face the same legal problems all the time. Although this condition is vital for rendering proper legal services, the work itself becomes boring in a short period of time. So, performing the same tasks is a quite boring thing.
Additionally, all of us dream of successful professional career which is necessary for both our professional and private lives. Meanwhile, in order to succeed we need to learn all the time and increase the level of our qualification. However, this is not feasible, if we do the same things all the time. For instance, in order to be promoted in the company I have worked for nearly 10 years, I had to ask the management to assign me tasks that would allow me /to/ learn new things. This indeed was the right way to hold a better position since by doing various things I became more experienced and could take on more responsibility. Consequently, the more you learn, the higher are the chances to succeed in a career.
To sum up briefly, our work takes a lot of time and energy from us, and in order to satisfy our needs it should be diverse and secure our professional growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e work itself becomes boring in a short period of time. So, performing the same tasks is a qui...
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Line 2, column 993, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the same tasks is a quite boring thing. Additionally, all of us dream of success...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rse and secure our professional growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58374384236 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75423318402 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1343274643 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9473684211 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883632435272 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305962329453 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322512347449 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614220235911 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385001052272 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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