TPO 42: Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Satisfaction in job depends on some factors like salary, working hours, colleagues and attraction. The last one defines how much a work complies with one's interest. Even though there are people who prefer to have a occupation with repeated actions, according to the statistics in Iran, most of the people tend to conduct various tasks. Getting bored of doing a constant action, needing to learn new things and looking for various fruitful outcomes are the principle supports to this issue.
As a threshold matter, employees are bored when they are asked to do a similar thing all day long. It is rooted in human nature that he wants to do diversified things during a day no matter if it is a job task or a game plan. As a matter of fact, It is only robots that are not getting tired of repeating a task. Accordingly, even workers who receive an ample wage may be discontent of their career.
Furthermore, a favorable activity is one with a potential to teach the worker new things.
Psychologists recommend that in order not to face psychic disorders, people have better apply for a job in which they can learn something new. Miscellaneous tasks performed in a day enhance the level of creativity and efficiency of employees in a remarkable extent. For instance, in my country, teachers are more satisfied with their jobs than bank clerks, since they learn new things while scrutinizing in books to teach; however, bank clerks do not learn fresh subjects according to their job nature.
Last but not least, workers will feel pleasure about their job if they are consent of the result of their task. A repeated task brings about a same product every day without a small advancement. Humans' sprit seeks deserving accomplishments to be proud for. It is why workers try hard on new fields and gain fresh discoveries or inventions. Essential tools that are available now are all the outcome of different tasks scientists have done.
In succinct, doing various tasks enhances the degree of satisfaction among workers. They may be upset of their unchangeable task on account of becoming boarded, learning no new skill and missing varied products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e defines how much a work complies with ones interest. Even though there are people ...
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Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ugh there are people who prefer to have a occupation with repeated actions, accor...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... tend to conduct various tasks. Getting bored of doing a constant action, needing to lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74582792722 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8646166935 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9473684211 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260289955417 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751261745902 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683506537007 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12540351025 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742384506911 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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