TPO 60: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Various life circumstances define how to manage our life. With the advances in technology, movements become more common in contemporary era. The question is whether it is better to live in one city during our life or not. Even though some people believe that settlement in one place have numerous advantages, I consider altering the living place as the ideal style of living. Seizing more positive opportunities and gaining more experience are the two main justifications explaining my horizon of view.
As a threshold matter, paramount opportunities are available in specific cities. Those planning to achieve success in a certain fields have to pursue their targets in the correct location. For example, students that dream for studying engineering in Ph.D. degree should travel out of their home town to big cities which include correspondent universities. However, not moving to the right location, those scholars will never acquire the knowledge they have planned for. Actually, opportunities are not spread evenly through the world. It is individuals who must investigate for their appropriate platform of growth. There are quite a few famous faces moving from their original city to other countries on account of progressing in their interested area.
Furthermore, what it seems dazzling in movement is derived experiences. Obviously, most of our treasured perceptions emanate from diversified challenges we exposed to during our travels or immigration. Such considerable experiences aid us in critical periods. In other words, enhancing humans' insight attributes to facing to miscellaneous occurrence that take place in different locations. Not only facing to the challenges but also becoming acquainted to diversified cultures provides a suitable background for human to raise their life skills. In contrast, those maintaining a regular point for living would miss lessons that journeys bring about.
In succinct, I agree to the statement since moving has some advantages that outweighs the disadvantages. Immigration and trips contribute to more prosperous future and rich experiences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60691823899 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08851301149 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9033053051 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.15 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14301008168 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377264267026 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490713496205 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809671886729 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469573765126 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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