TPO 42- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been highly discussed about happiness from work. Some people believe that workers will gain satisfaction from doing different types of works. While some argue that it is happier for workers to the same work. In my opinion, I think it depends on the context of the work.
Firstly, most of people are unwilling to do the same work everyday because they cannot bear the tediousness from repeating the same tasks mechanically. Workers will be motivated if they have chances to do different tasks and they can get a variety of skills in different domains.
However, the disadvantages of doing different sorts of works should be taken into consideration. If workers are told to switch their tasks from now and then, they will face a big challenge because they have to force themselves to learn plenty of new knowledge in order to meet their boss’s demand. Thus, it will surely bring heavy pressure to the workers, which makes them feel upset and stressful.
Furthermore, doing the same work every day does not mean that the context of work is the same. Also, if a work devote his time to one specific task, he will gradually become a master of that task. For example, an old chief in Japan is called the god of sushi. Since he was ten, he began to learn how to make delicious sushi. And he had kept making sushi for almost 70 years. His desire for pursuing delicious sushi makes him a grand master in this field, and he never feels bored about this, he believe it is an honor to do sushi for his customers. Hence, doing the same work is not boring when a worker can attain happiness and achievement from it.
In conclusion, we have to clarify which reasons lead workers to be happy. How different the type of tasks is unlikely to simply determine how happy workers can be during their workday. If one type of task containing diverse challenges stimulates someone’s motivation, the people would attain likewise pleasure from the work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72140762463 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5299778155 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4554461636 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7368421053 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240657266317 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746468876491 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725812388771 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149453147481 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657762080425 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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