Parenting has always been a prominent issue which has engendered heated debates among people. One question which can raise here is whether busy parents should put their little time with children for having fun or doing schoolwork. While most people believe that education will assure childrens' future so parents should specific their time to school assignments, others hold the opposite perspective. I firmly think that parents time should be dedicated to having time with their offsprings due to some coدsiderable reasons. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate on my points of view.
One remarkable reason is that student health is more important than their education. Doing sports would guaranty students health by decreasing the risk of most dangerous diseases like diabetes, thus, it would be advantageous for children as well as their parents. One recent survey on childrens' health indicatثs that nowadays due to lack of activity, childrens' health would be in danger more than past. Consequently, parents should take care of their children health by doing sports with them.
Another notable reason which worths some words here is that parents should pay attention to childrens' mental situation. Mental diseases like having stress and depression would be damaging for children especially when parents are busy most times. Having fun with parents would be a great cure or prevention of depression and pressure. Psychologists have discovered that children who do not have enough fun time with their parents suffer from depression more than others who their parents specific some time for pleasure activity with. It indicates that having cheerful times with children is necessary.
Last but not least, students have enough time for their tasks in the schools which would make them exhausted, hence, they need having fun more than anything else after schools. For example, when I was in the primary schools I had 3 classes each day which really made me tedious. My parents were always busy with their job, therefore, I really missed them. When I came back home the only thing that I needed was spending fun time with my parents to feel better because I could do my tasks at other time. Most students enable for doing their homework without their parents' help, therefore, parents can put their time for children pleasure not doing assignments.
To sum up, taking all the factors into consideration, we might come to the result that having fun and doing sport with parents is one essential requirement for children healthy life. I recommend that busy parents spend their time with their children by doing activities which are enjoyable for their children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20046620047 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51421051288 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508158508159 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1249748342 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.238095238 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391422664313 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143496592124 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099226910188 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262230224554 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861274548605 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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