TPO 45
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Making decision is an important part of our life from child hood, and It is advisable to consult with an appropriate person. Some people claim that parents'role was not more noticeable as guider in the past in compare with the present time, but I do not think so. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, having limit knowledge among younger persons was common in the past. For example, my father grew in a town and did not access to school. As a result, it was clear that he relied on his parents experiences for choosing among his complicated situations. In fact, many people were in conditions similar to my father's one. The worse thing was that in some times, not only did parents cause critical problems for their unaware children such as their marriage, jobs, stall of life, and etc., but they also forced them to obey them without any question.
The second cause may referred to the development of technology these days. Having up-date sources of information make it possible for us to obtain a good deal of awareness by clicking on our computer's keyboard only in a few seconds. By having enough knowledge, we reach to self-confidence for selecting suitable conditions, and less dependence to our mothers and fathers. For instance, when I want to cook something new, I easily search through internet and make delicious cakes and foods. On the contrary, my mother asks me about some tasted foods' recipe.
Last, appearing various field of sciences in addition to the society' need to being professional in a certain matter, bring us the opportunities for consulting with expert persons. I will exemplify my point with a true story about something that happened to me. Last year, when I forced to choose between chemistry and biochemistry as my major in the university, I talked with my professors and finally preferred to continue my education in later one. Surely, my parents could not conduct me as well as my academic consult.
In all, what drives someone to think that parents have pale part in children' making decision process nowadays, may fall in to 3 main categories including low level of parents' knowledge, our fast developing technology, and need to getting information from expert ones in each fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...ng was that in some times, not only did parents cause critical problems for their unawa...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...as their marriage, jobs, stall of life, and etc., but they also forced them to obey them...
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Line 7, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...duct me as well as my academic consult. In all, what drives someone to think tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87596899225 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71025312968 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4951788713 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179575544607 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471279299281 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333366004274 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933225546345 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376350919829 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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