TPO 19
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Taking place various events in our world makes it necessary to find about them as a part of global society. Although some people claim that for having better knowledge of our around, we should survey through wide range of informative references, but I do not think so. In my view, there is no need to search whole of them for being update. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of time, one might propose that it is not advisable that we try to find information through many sources. To clarify, I need be aware about weather condition each day, if I spend my precious time only for knowing about climate, I could neither study and do my favorite work due to shortage of time.
Another aspect of existing expended kinds of news 's sources is their accuracy. For example, many magazines, news papers and even websites broadcast exaggerated information just for their benefits. In fact, it is not wisdom to rely on many of them. Last week, I heard news about my favorite celebrity and unfortunately, spend much time on internet for following that. Finally, I found it was false. Not only did I mislead through huge amount of rumor, but I also waste my time.
Most importantly, having considered useful and accredited informative sites, people do not need to be confused to acquiring their special knowledge. For instance, If I need to research about my thesis in chemistry, I will definitely find various related materials in "Science Direct" and "Scopus" websites.
In all, what drives somebody to assert that spending time for having better knowledge from different sources of information is unnecessary perhaps fall into 3 basic categories including wasting huge amount of time, not being trust all references and existing certain resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erences and existing certain resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01618122977 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8294748419 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4770056381 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118600033217 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400869719753 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378793179785 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692723019446 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344431809453 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.