Throughout history, people have always been seeking the best way to solve their problems and get rid of their obstacles. They put all their efforts to find the pragmatic way to be prosperous and pave the success. Thus, giving advice and talking to some professional and knowledgeable people, particularly well-known people, would be one of the appealing means to find out what to do. Recently, in this regard, a contentious question arises which is whether young generation listen to celebrities' opinions or elders. As a matter of fact, I believe young adults and juveniles are more likely to utilize the celebrities and renowned people become their model. In what follows, I will explore my conspicuous reasons to elaborate this issue.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that young generations always have insight into the way that famous people do and they want to follow them in all their aspects of their life. Not only do they represent fashion, but also they impress people by their repetition. For instance, I have heard of a survey amongst some people between 19 and 25. They were asked about their sought-after careers. The results of this research were amazing: almost 95 percent of them wanted to be actor and famous. While they were asked why they had chosen this career, they mentioned that they wanted to be wealthy and fashionable as like as actors.
Another subtle point to be mentioned is that old people have this idea that athletes and entertainers present the attractive face of every tasks and since they do not want to destroy their repetition between people, they assert speech that they are supposed. By that I mean, I think older people have enough experiences that they are not readily be deceived. They actually do not believe the words of these celebrities. Take my grandfather as an example; once we were watching a TV advertising and one of the well-known athletes was acting on it and told about advantages of a product. My grandfather told me that it was not a reliable advertisement and advertising managers used him as a tool to represent their product to public and change their mind. However, the product was worthwhile to buy, I could not purchase it any more.
To put it briefly, contemplating all reasons, one soon realizes that young generations are more influenced by the celebrities since they are not only fashionable, but also more accepted as they impress people by their performances. In addition, more experienced people especially elder people do not believe their words since they are aware of the fact that most of this words are dictated to them. Thus, I recommend that think about their opinion before they make any decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...they are aware of the fact that most of this words are dictated to them. Thus, I rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94933920705 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72125933754 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.867351894 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176525950137 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060647164878 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042502443444 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120319531766 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213686031799 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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