TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

People usually have different perspectives on the events happening around the world. However, in my opinion, it is definitely very essential for people to notice what's occurs every day, even though it will have little impact on your life. Here are three reasons as below.

First of all, I am a person who interested in the things that rarely happen in my life. Thus, I often watch lots of CNN10 to broaden my horizon, and one of the most intriguing events is about the spaceship craft of China crashing on the earth from outer space recently. Besides, after watching the news that I am able to learn more about how the scientists predict the route of craft and also fulfill my curiosity. On the contrary, if I don't acquire the information every day, I may be a boring person.

Moreover, after watching the world news, far away from my country, I can learn different culture through the television. To be more specific, while I see a TLC at my home, I even don't need to spend lots of money to travel but also learn various or odd thing around the world such as women from middle east will receive a car license in the future which means women can have their power and right gradually. Hence, despite this news will not affect my daily life, I can learn lots of useful knowledge.

Last but not least, noticing the events happening all over the world can make our conversation much deeper than others who don't know. Also, it is a key to success when you can illustrate something totally different to your clients. It will also allow you to have a huge sense of accomplishment. Nevertheless, if you don't observe things around the world, you may not have competitiveness. Eventually, you will be the ordinary people as others.

To sum up, I highly recommend that it is really important for people to learn the more global news. Because people need to keep learning new knowledge, not to be a boring person and making you successful in the future.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, thus, while, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64265129683 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5386023038 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0315037436 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185419361779 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632554672671 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429580455981 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102522304854 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518375029848 0.0645574589148 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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