TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

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TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

Without a shadow of the doubt, knowing about different events and news all over the world can affect our lives in different aspects. We live in a world so, we cannot be nonchalant about that. Many people comtend that it is important to know about events happening around the world, while others assert it is not. Both of the opposing arguments appear to be somewhat convincing and stand to point. However, my personal experience and acctual observation of life have led me to agree that being aware of events around the world is a very important matter. In the ensuing lines, I delve into my reasons to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount reason is that by knowing about different events and especially the important of them we can increase our knowledge about them. The more we learn, the more we inderstand. Also, if there is catastrophic situation in the world that can envolved us we can prepare ourselves to face with te situation. Nowadays, people all over the world are struggle with the decrease in water resources. So, by knowing this issue we can manage our water rsourses which are very important in having convenient life. Consequently, by managing the situation we can have the opportunity to solve the problem. In this situation, by using the ability of scientists and their idea fabricating new devices to refine the contaminated water will be practical.
Another ponit springing to mind is that knowing about events in the world can broaden our horizon. If there is a harmful flood or earthquake in part of the world, we can help the people. As a result, by doing good deeds we can improve ourselves. The more we improve, the greater our chance to inspire others. In addition, we are responsible about all the people in all over the world. It is our humanity task to help other people. For example, last year a deadly earthquke occured in China. We watched the scenes from the television and distructions was too much. My people in my country, Italy sens a lot of food and other essential object there. So, knowing about events is important.
Although the mentioned reasons are the first ones as advatages of knowing about events, there is an advantage about not knowing about events, too. In this situation, there is no need to be concern and we juat live in a calm atmosphere. Sometimes nowing too much disturbs pople and makes them nervous. However, I really think that people must be aware about other people situation. So, I think we can neglected this benefit compared to benefits of knowing about events.
To sum it all up, it is easy to see the advantages of being aware about events in all over the world. We can increase our knowledge, we can be prepare for different situations and also we can improve our good characteristics by having empathy with other people. I hope someday all the people live together in the world without any bad events.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'neglect'
Suggestion: neglect
...er people situation. So, I think we can neglected this benefit compared to benefits of kn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, really, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75595238095 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6129069125 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462301587302 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9159239915 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3225806452 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2580645161 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61290322581 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173545407152 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544441022493 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578911553012 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114544581489 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517890450731 0.0645574589148 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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