Organization and planning have become one prominent aspect of everyone's' life which are significant requirements for overcoming obstacles in modern life. One question which raised here is that whether it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan because modern life is very complex or not. While an overwhelming majority believe that organization is necessary for juvenile, others hold the opposite perspective. I firmly think that scheduling and organization are more eminent that ones might think owing to some highlighted reasons. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate on my points of view.
The most considerable reason is that life is more competitive than past so people should put more efforts and time to gain different skills for their career. Therefore, juveniles should have a delicate plan to spend their time on significant skills which would be helpful for their future career. For example, companies have developed in the recent century especially in the computer sciences so new employee should learn a lot of complicated software to be qualified for getting a job. Consequently, juveniles should consider this issue in their academic career in the university so they should have a plan to learn the required software.
Another notable reason which worths some words here is that nowadays technology has become an intriguing issue for people which make them spend their time on it so they would ignore their important tasks. Hence, juveniles should make a plan in order to prevent wasting their time. A recent survey has been accomplished in this regard to find how much time the students are surfing on the internet and communication application. It indicated that a third of examined students in Newyork city spend more than five hours on the internet just for playing games, connection to their friends and seeking for celebrities news which is not advantageous for their improvement. Hence, the juvenile should make a plan for themselves to put their time on more remarkable tasks which are more effective.
Last but not least,
To sum up, taking all the noticeable factors into account, we might come to the result that the organization is dramatically substantial for juveniles. I recommend that young people plan for each day of their life to become as prosperous as they can in the future.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15567282322 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80977243145 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6075806913 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.125 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19088484631 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757357469681 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925040399675 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105357311626 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780849219587 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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