It is no secret that money is one of the prominent requirements in today 's life. One significant question in this regard is about salaries for university professors which has always engendered a heated debate among academicians. While some people believe that the qualification of professor merely depends on their tendency to this work not salary, I hold the opposite perspective. I think it is obvious that salary has marked effects on every job thus it influences the professor's job too. Ensuing paragraphs will elaborate on my point of view through some pivotal reasons.
To begin with, providing a satisfaction economical situation in the societies essential to meet the needs like food, house and other parts of life. The professor should have a well-paid salary, as a result, they can get release of economic stresses. In this way, they will concentrate on their job rather than finding another job to achieve more money. In the recent survey in this regard in my country, students of different universities were asked about their professor behavior and how much time they spend to help their student in academic materials. The professors of the universities which provide more salaries were more interested in academic work and spend more time with their student. This clearly shows how salaries can have influence on the efficiency of universities.
Second, one considerable factor which is obviously considered in choosing a career is salary. Smart and qualified students at graduated degree pay attention to different aspects of their future job especially salary beside other important factors. Unsatisfying salary will discourage most of the smart students even if they are interested in this job. As a result, future professors would not be intelligent enough to improve the quality of education. For instance, when we were at university the most prosperous students did not want to be a professor and they mention low salary as the cause.
To conclude, professors affect directly or indirectly on students future life and career. They should have a satisfying salary, therefore, they will be just involved in their academic works. Besides, high salary for this position will attract intelligent student, thus, they will become successful professors in the future. I suggest that this job should be one of the most satsifying job in the society espicialy their salaries should be lucrative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...To begin with, providing a satisfaction economical situation in the societies essential to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25388601036 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85977977441 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8316395931 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102660670653 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354120834031 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300341000312 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696631226764 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179973321905 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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