Young people these days have quite a lot responsibilities to do. Various tasks which you will not be capable of doing all if you are not an organized person with an appropriate schedule. Hence, it is necessary for youth to be able to plan and stick to their schedules in order to do all their tasks before the deadlines. Although some people are for the opinion that one should do any tasks at a time without considering other works, I believe that one must be organized and make sure that if stick to their plan, all their works can be easily done. There are some reasons for this claim that I will elaborate on, through the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly, sticking to a plan will help you be focused on a specific task and avoid anxiety about other works you have to do. Obviously, no one wants to just finish their work. We all want to do our jobs appropriately. Hence, it is necessary to concentrate. One can not be focused if thinking about the different things they have to do. Having a fixed plan will help you to assure that you are able to finish all the assigned works at a right time. To illustrate, I can recall the time that I had 7 exams in two weeks and obtaining good grades in those required too much effort. If it wasn't for the schedule that I made, I couldn't be focused while studying and achieve my goal to gain good marks in my exams.
Secondly, we are not aware of what will happen in days of our lives. However, if you have a flexible schedule, you can be sure that despite the accidents, you are still able to finish your works. However, without a plan, you will just struggle with the accidents and forget about all the assigned works you had to do. For instance, before turning to an organized person I just thought that I can decide what to do at the moment and having a plan is unnecessary. Once, I had to finish a project before the deadline but something unexpected happened and I lost three days and couldn't do the project before the assigned time. Nevertheless, if I had a flexible plan I could solve all the problems and finish my project and would not go through all those stressful days.
In summation, organized people who always stick to a flexible plan can easily do all their works and are mostly calm people who never get anxious. Therefore, I firmly suggest planning before starting your tasks. Soon you will see how advantageous is to be an organized person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t wasnt for the schedule that I made, I couldnt be focused while studying and achieve m...
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...cted happened and I lost three days and couldnt do the project before the assigned time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4693877551 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49365482484 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446712018141 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0059683829 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5909090909 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0454545455 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190882680312 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656764721598 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517856550922 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13422962997 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306965706805 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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