Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Some jobs require people to always deal with the same tasks every day but some others offer a variety of tasks to the workers. Some people may hold the view that doing the same thing over and over again at work is easier and better for the people. However, some others may take the viewpoint that it would be better if people engaged in different tasks at the workplace, I agree with the latter one. I will elaborate on my points of view through the following paragraphs.
The first noteworthy point to be mentioned is that, doing some mundane tasks every day can not only make the workers bored and less interested, but it also can make them tired and therefore reduce their work efficiency. In other words, the people may find it extremely tiring repeating the same things every day which causes them to lose their interest and enthusiasm in working and leads to a decline in their performance quality. To illustrate, my aunt is a secretary in an office, she has to do similar tasks such as answering phone calls and making arrangements all day long, she always comes home exhausted and says that her life has become so monotonous. She is even thinking about quitting her job. If she had had a job with different tasks and responsibilities she would have taken interest in it and would have performed more efficiently.
The second reason which deserves some words is that, doing a variety of tasks during the day can help individuals learn and develop different skills which can lead a person to become more talented and successful in life. For instance, my sister as a tour guide has to deal with different tasks and improve certain skills in order to succeed at her job. She explains that every working day brings her some challenges. Because she has to deal with different things such as meeting new people and interacting with them, learning about tourist attractions, historical places, restaurants and also practicing English which she has to speak fluently in order to communicate with the tourists. So as a tour guide she should develop her social skills and speech as well as improving her language knowledge. All this causes her to turn into a more skilled person who can also succeed in other aspects of life.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that, jobs which require people to accomplish different tasks are far better than jobs with repetitious tasks because they will not only enhance individual's skills and abilities but they also cause people to work more efficiently and have a better performance at work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80275229358 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54578890683 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474770642202 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4471536208 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216018331814 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709018782832 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594737734432 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143837731142 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380988575766 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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