By and large, the significance of happiness is little debate in today's society. This is due to the fact that all the people have some problems during their hectic life and they should have a good ability to be happy. On should keep in mind, this is not surprising to notice that like all prominent subjects, its aspects are subject to discussion and analysis. For instance, what is the better manner to have friends when it comes to the impact of it in happiness is controversial. A question that is sometimes raised in this regard is that "is it the more important effect on hapiness when you have a ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time?"
I personally repudiate this statement as it seems not enough logical. In what follows I will attempt to clarify the reason for my decision more.
On imperative reason the coming to mind at first is that in many situation, this ability have no effect. It's conspicuous that when people fall in some situations that can't continue perfectly in this long period friendships, it can hurt them. Perhaps, a more spesific and firsthand experience can shed more light on the matter. Let me take back you to a few years ago when my friend wants to study in another country. Actually, she doesn't have ability to make new friends easily and when she wen in Italy, she faced with very problems since not only missed she all of her friends because of long distance problem, but also she couldn't find new friend.
Another intresting point which deserves some words here is that if people can make new friends easily, they can be more happy since they are not depend on persons. I mean they be happy wether they be with new person or not since they can make new friendship easily. I think that in this situation, people consider themselves at the first degree of their life and it can help them to be more self-confident. For the purpose of illustration, a rather recent yet substantially important social study conducted at the University of Tehran can be pointed out. The researchers found out that the more ability to make new friends that people have, the more self-confident can create in themselves.
To wrap it all up, all the aforementioned or maybe shortsighted ideas lead us to the conclusion that the ability of making new friends is obligatory in order to ensure happiness since it helps to people have more adaptation in the new situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ortant effect on hapiness when you have a ability to maintain friendships with a ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
... a ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time?&apos...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time?' I personally repudiate this sta...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many situations'.
Suggestion: many situations
... the coming to mind at first is that in many situation, this ability have no effect. Its consp...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hen people fall in some situations that cant continue perfectly in this long period ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...study in another country. Actually, she doesnt have ability to make new friends easily...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... of long distance problem, but also she couldnt find new friend. Another intresting p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ey can be more happy since they are not depend on persons. I mean they be happy wether...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, for instance, i mean, i think, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71728971963 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67721022357 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4363373762 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.764705882 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308172493589 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944233087197 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724496068198 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166348183458 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465860833996 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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