TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends

How different type of friendships could have effect on human has always been a noteworthy matter when it comes to talking about providing more happy situation. That is owing to the fact that no one can deny the profound effect of friendship on people's happiness. There are a plethora of people who contend that the more the friendship that exists, the more happiness can create. Others take an opposite point. I, to a great extent, corroborate the second perspective as it seems more rational. In what follows, I will attempt to clarify the reasons in support of my viewpoint in detail.

To commence with, the most imperative reason comes to mind is that all the people have new effect on your mind. It is conspicuous that the basic of the friendship is about the common ideas and good time that you could have with someone. Let me tell you about my professor's speech which was about the friendship in the first days of this semester. According to Dr. Taheri, whom I admire the most, "every person have new lesson for we, during the life". Actually, everyone has new idea about the specific subject and I think it is better to hear more ideas instead of be involve with same idea during the life. Without a shadow of doubt, the more ideas we have, the more experience can have and having more experience can cheers people up! As you can see, it is better to make new friend easily instead of stay with some people during the whole life.

Another exquisite point to be mentioned is about the relation between intimacy and time! I personally repudiate the idea that the more time people be together, the more intimate they could become. I have different own experience could refute this relation. Let me take you back to three years ago when I was in the first year of my master education. In that time, for the first time, I saw Zahra, who was in our dormitory and studied Civil Engineering. There were too many differences between our majors, Pharmaceutical Science and Civil Engineering! Meanwhile, for 2 weeks, we were the best one for each other. As matter of fact, I saw Zahra in a food festival and we had talked in a booth which related to special food. Then I asked her about the major and the location of her dormitory, therefore we become the friend ever! This experience taught me that happiness can create by making new friend easily.

To wrap it all up, taking all the aforementioned ideas into consideration, we may draw the conclusion that not only making new friends easily could help to have more new ideas but also they may become the best friend and you experience the best happiness ever.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cheer'
Suggestion: cheer
...can have and having more experience can cheers people up! As you can see, it is better...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, while, i think, talking about, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66163793103 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52463983463 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502155172414 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.645192964 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.15 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20165747933 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612050640499 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451442030525 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126958915593 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264513508435 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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