TPO 53 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has been a heated debate on whether governments should spend money improving internet access or public transportation. taking the growing need for internet resource into consideration, I believe it is more important for governments to support internet improvement.The supportive reasons are as follows.
To begin with, internet provides much convenience to our daily life. In the past, when few people could get access to internet, it was really difficult for a customer to purchase something which was not sold in s/he's city. S/he could only travel far or even give up buying the product because online shopping had not come to the stage yet. however, today we can order whatever we want from the shopping websites and the products can be delivered directly to our house in a couple of days. also, products are often cheaper on the internet since online selling can save much money for the sellers from renting and decorating a store. these days there're still some places in the countryside which cannot get access to internet. government can offer help with more funds provided to develop internet. Therefore, internet can provide more convenience if more people can get access to it .
Secondly, internet does require improvement to provide people with better experiences. With the ever-growing development of technology, such as vr and 4K videos, people can get access to the virtual reality without stepping outside their homes. however, unfortunately, only a few people can get access to these high-end products because obstacles such as high price and low-transportation speed hinder ordinary people from experiencing these techniques. For example, in China nowadays, we can only experience online vr games in some grand shopping malls or technology companies. if governments spend more money developing internet, it's positive to expect that we will sooner or later be able to experience the fancy games with comfort at home.
In addition, with improved internet access, the young generation can make more contributions to society in the future. internet is like a warehouse that contains tons of information, covering different categories of knowledge. With better access to the internet, we can make full use of the study resources as well as learning the subjects we are interested in. taking myself for an example, apart from daily schoolwork, I also enjoy learning computer coding from online lessons, which can expand my horizon as well as my grade in computer science and mathematics. In this way, students can easily get better grades for school and become elites to society in the future.
In summary, considering the convenience internet provides, the fantastic experience it conveys, and more knowledge it gives, it's more beneficial for governments to spend money improving internet access in order to construct a better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3281938326 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89765029794 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2778772449 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.19047619 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256077405645 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922495817077 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082180465945 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19268603486 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962553631958 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.