tpo 9
The material discusses the concept of using the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine instead of the internal-combustion engine. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading pasage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely the hydrogen needed for fuel-engine comes from water or natural gas, so it will be easily available. Next, using hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines will solve the pollution problem. Finally, this kind of engine will be cost-effective.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engine is not directly used from water, but from very pure liquid state; moreover. this liquid is very difficult to be produced and storage. it could be produce under very low temperature, which needs high equipment. In addition to that, the hydrogen-based engine will not solve the pollution problem, because it needs pure hydrogen from water, and that needs lots of energy, which produces from burning coal and cause environment pollution. One final point, the hydrogen-based engine made of platinum, which is an expensive metal helps hydrogen to go under chemical reactions to produce electricity, so the engine will be expensive.
In summary there are discrepancies in the presented information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oints outlined in the reading pasage. Firstly, the reading details specific po...
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...ind of engine will be cost-effective. Conversely, the listening challenges the...
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... from very pure liquid state; moreover. this liquid is very difficult to be produced...
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...y difficult to be produced and storage. it could be produce under very low tempera...
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...e final point, the hydrogen-based engine made of platinum, which is an expensive ...
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...of platinum, which is an expensive metal helps hydrogen to go under chemical reac...
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...ity, so the engine will be expensive. In summary there are discrepancies in t...
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... be expensive. In summary there are discrepancies in the presented informati...
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...repancies in the presented information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72195121951 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14739630644 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8939834725 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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