TPO02
Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of , we find that some people hold the idea of always telling the truth meanwhile others prefer to not always telling the truth. As far as I concerned, it is more advisable to chose telling the truth rather than not telling the truth. My arguments for this point is listed as follows.
First of all, it is important to consider that you don't need to be anxiety. Certainly, there may be some perspectives that I neglected to fully consider. However, in most cases, when you are lied someone will let you make more lies to complete what your state before. To illustrate this idea let us consider the following example that my college whom I have worked him for 5 years, he lost an important file, but he don't want to let the boss to notice this situation. so he lied the boss, and he made more lies to compete what he said. Finally, the boss notice what he has done, then fired him.
Secondly, the equal importance is that people will trust you. Of course, for some people, there may be an argument to be made for other positions. However, it would be fair to say that for most people it will be trust who always say the truth. Take a case of , a friend of mind whom I have known him for 20 years, he is a great man, he never tells lies. So I really trust him, no matter what he say. This experience taught him that if you want a great relationship between people, don't said the lie. This is a good example showing that always telling the truth which can keep a great relationship with people.
By way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, when advantage and disadvantage of telling the truth are carefully compared, the most striking view is obvious. Not only don't you need to be anxiety, but also people will trust you. That is why everyone will do the same thing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nsiderably when it comes to the issue of , we find that some people hold the idea ...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to tell'.
Suggestion: to tell
...oncerned, it is more advisable to chose telling the truth rather than not telling the t...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...l, it is important to consider that you dont need to be anxiety. Certainly, there ma...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...r. However, in most cases, when you are lied someone will let you make more lies to ...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ears, he lost an important file, but he dont want to let the boss to notice this sit...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... let the boss to notice this situation. so he lied the boss, and he made more lies...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...who always say the truth. Take a case of , a friend of mind whom I have known him ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt a great relationship between people, dont said the lie. This is a good example sh...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...most striking view is obvious. Not only dont you need to be anxiety, but also people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, of course, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34701174748 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0490786469 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9473684211 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.