TPO14-Task2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
traveling is essential in the life of many individuals, they can have joyful and beneficial journeys whether it is in their country or overseas. personally I believe, traveling outside the original nation is better. For two reasons, this is because it provides an opportunity to discover new cultures and a new refreshing environment.
First, one of best things about going overseas is the learning of a new culture of that country, you can enjoy their music, in addition, their food because it differs a lot from place to place like mansaf in Jordan, tacos in Mexico and kokosi in Tunesia. Furthermore, you can learn about their art and read their books that rich your knowledge. My personal experience is a compelling example, last year i traveled to turkey for two weeks, although it is a short period but i learn so many things like how they make ice cream, sweats, boza, shawarma. Moreover, i enjoyed the buildings and transportation system, also I went to their unique library and they tell me about the history of turkey and tradition out there.
Second, each country has its own nature or environment by trying to discover that and feel it you will be a new refreshed man. Psychologically, when you are depressed and bored chang your lifestyle and ordinary environment to relief these stressors. green trees are more comfortable than desert, calm weather is more energetic than hot weather, so if you are suffer from these proplem you should try that. For instance, when i visited turkey i saw variety of climates in one contrey, each regions have unique climate and nature, one was cold rainy, other cold snowy and even hot dry weather in some regions. All of that recharge me and i felt like i was new baby born.
In conclusion, i am with the opinion that travelling overseas is more beneficial, this is because it is culturally and naturally fascinating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...urally fascinating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.971875 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75161706718 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0361047058 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181782469669 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620339392216 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047053232985 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106125016369 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851013405659 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.