TPO19-In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
To punish a culprit in a court, an attorney must provide ample and diverse pieces of evidence. Also, to confirm a disease, various diagnostic tests must be done. Therefore, to get complete information, we should utilize different resources. I have three main rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, if we can collect various aspects of the news from diverse media like television, radio, podcasts, newspapers, social media...etc that particular data will be correct. In other words, different souces may interpret news in different ways. As a result, we can easily drive conclusions regarding it by trusting the most repeated ones. For instance, in the period of COVID-19, information relating to every country is available at our fingertips in seconds. As an international student, I can acquire the number of affected cases and deaths of my home country through various means like English new channels and also my native language channels. Not only that, but social media like Facebook and Youtube also have immense data to share. Subsequently, I can compare the values and finalize the data. As u can see the effect of multiple news resources to make conclusions.
Next, the word 'NEWS' is formed by 4 words, where N stands for the north, E for the east, W for the west, and S for the south, so it itself defines the information of all four directions. Therefore, the news is a center of knowledge from all the directions and incorporates the whole world in it. It gives us information about things which are happening or happened around the world as well as it keeps us updated about activities in your nearby areas.
And beyond all this information available, these resources are more reliable and trustworthy. For example, newspapers and other news related media which gives us news shows us pictures and videos of what has happened hence we can trust them blindly. They prevent us from rumor and chaos of news satire. There is so much fake news are spreading through media. So we must differentiate them.
So, to sum up, I am more inclined to get information from many different news resources. They are more reliable and gives information at once without any deviation from the truth. It keeps us updated about all the information about everything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 812, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98721227621 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80111054099 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570332480818 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8752312453 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7826086957 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287198528349 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778101005424 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682127388593 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162099296893 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06891353849 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.