TPO27: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' job than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the children had better follow their parents' job. In contrast, there are those who believe that following parents' job is not practical at all. I, to a great extent, agree with the second group of people. in my opinion, interest, newness, and payment play major roles to select a job among the children.
The first and foremost reason is that whether the child is interested in one's parents’ job or not. In selecting a job, having interest is significant and vital. if the child does not have any passion to his or work, is can cause a lot of damage for oneself and even for others. therefore, compelling children to pursue their parents' job is not reasonable. take a fixer (who fix cars), as an example, if his son does not have passion and interest to do this type of job, it will cause he not to fix care as well as he should do. it is possible that car breaks down on the trip and owner of car and her or his family cannot take a pleasure from their trips.
The second fact which should be taken into consideration is that some kinds of jobs with the passage of time lose their own values, so pursuing these jobs is not suggested for the young or the children that are going to select a job. thanks to improvement in technology in industry and somewhere like this it is not necessary that others follow some jobs. The brilliant example in this respect can be taxi agency. Nowadays, there are several phone applications that help the people find the nearest and cheapest taxi in the little time. therefore, they do not have enough interest to use taxi agency.
Finally, the third reason is that the amount of money that one person make from job is of great importance to select that job. in the other words, the children are always surveying their parents; income, so if they find the income low, they do not chose that job. take me an example, my father was a cook. he always worked hard, and made a small deal of money. therefore, for this reason, I did not follow my father's job.
In short, all the mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that selecting a job is depended on other parameters such as the rate of income, interest and newness rather than their parents’ job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, in contrast, in short, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5197044335 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40859624537 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509852216749 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8452134327 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.380952381 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407727070803 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125778204365 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102280032816 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249173044429 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467261989108 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.