TPO28- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's parents are totally different from the previous generation because they care more about their children’s life especially their education. In fact, as technology grows, they get to know more about the benefits of education and science for the development of the society. In this regard, I definitely agree with this statement that parents today are more sensitive and involved in their children's education than before. To support my claim there are reasons stated as below.
To begin with, parent's now have academic education and some may have higher degrees in their field of study, so they are more curious about their children's education comparing to the parents in the past. In fact, they own more social and practical experience which enables them to offer valuable suggestions. Take my parents for example, in contrast to their parents, my father is a university professor and my mother is a high school teacher, both of whom are perfectly knowledgeable about educational issues. They gave me realistic notions regarding my interests to choose the best college by analyzing the rank of the college as well as its reputation, location and so many useful things. Consequently, I made the best decision to select my college based on their help.
In addition, in some cases parents have to interfere in their children's educational decisions because the wrong decision may directly affect the financial status of the family. As most of the children are sponsored by their parents, they should inform their children about their economic situation, In other words, to what extend they can afford the expenses of their education, particularly when children want to pursue their education abroad. This would enable them not only to control the other expenses but also avoid their children getting stuck in bad conditions like being expelled because of not paying the tuition fees.
In sum, parents today are more interested to help their children’s education than parents were in the past because they are more seasoned due to having academic education. Likewise, since they are responsible for their children's expenses of education, they have to participate in their children’s educational decisions based on their affordability as well. This is why I posited a supportive assertion to this topic.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as well as, in contrast to, in other words, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27567567568 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8198710527 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.970713724 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.45110844103 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320435771518 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125095813081 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109839326787 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236334441173 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830989578145 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.