By and large, it’s established beyond doubt that young people in today's hectic world should make more sophisticated decisions rather than their parents or ancestors. While some people believe that today’s young people have more knowledge on different subject areas, others stand at the other end of the continuum, holding the view that young girls and boys have to follow their parents’ decisions. Personally speaking, I believe that young people should have more freedom in making decisions about all to make their lives. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoints are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in today's world young people have more knowledge about the progressive and different subjects they face in their life; as a result, they individually can evaluate their situations and circumstances and make the most convenient decision without getting assistance from their parents. An example can drive this fact home. Some years ago, my brother had to choose between two majors to study as bachelor science. As my parents prefer that he should study electrical engineering instead of his favorite major, He had decided to study computer engineering. They could not believe that computer engineering as a new major in the world has a bright future. Now, we all know that what my brother had chosen was the best.
Furthermore, young people in this sophisticated world have the opportunity of being independent and being on their own feet. They can decide independently these years rather than before. It is no secret to any one that some parents in the past unconsciously disturbed their children's lives by making decisions instead of them. To prevent this phenomenon, young people should make decisions without any consideration about what their parents want them to do. After a while, they have more experiences in their life, and it will help them to make a better future. Therefore, they have their own self-governing life as they will be more careful about their decisions.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned reasons and points to account, I strongly believe that young people should decide all their important and simple decisions by themselves independently. The more they decide and make more experiences in their life, the better future they will have. Moreover, they will have a better relationship with their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75265693129 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0592522375 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498262530519 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162173875455 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16464317276 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373423318977 0.150856017488 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241531594433 0.0645574589148 374% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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