TPO48
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this new society, with emerging of technologies and changing the conventional way of living, I agree that the young need to know how to plan and organize things, due to a couple of reasons that I will express them in the following paragraphs.
First of all, nowadays time is tough and harsh. We are lost in the busy days and as a result, without the ability to plan, it seems impossible to handle all these tasks and works. For instance, by considering a senior university student, like me, the importance of this point is more clear. I have to do a lot of works at the same time, studying for exams and my final courses, looking for a job, and applying to study abroad for higher education degrees. All these subjects need a lot of detailed preparations. As a result, I have to plan for every minute 24/7 to do all of them properly.
Secondly, I feel these days, planning can save money for people especially the young that have more costs and a limited budget. If we take the example of myself, I should be aware of all my expenses and costs with considering my budget, for living in a big city and it's primary costs and also other expenses to fulfill my goals and wishes. It is not possible if I can not organize my money and costs.
Third, it will decrease the tensions and mental pressure that bother people because of the burdens of life. When you stock between a lot of tensions about your future, study, work, financial issues and stuff like that, you became confused and nervous. Making plans can solve this problem because it gives you a clear and organized plan.
To sum up, the importance of planning and organizing is obvious to everyone and it is even more crucial in modern life and specifically for the young to stay calm and become successful by having the ability to plan and organize time, money, duties, and other stuff.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54029850746 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46874875751 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8748450313 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291723364033 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875642933737 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640191983666 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155122628566 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439546554926 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.