TPO48
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In the present time, our lives are becoming more sophisticated every day. Therefore, it is important for the people to find a way to cope with this sophistication. Although a plethora of people hold the opinion that having some abilities such as planning and organization is not beneficial, others disagree with this point of view. I, to a great extent, hold the viewpoint that all people, especially young adults, have to make an attempt to become well organized. Among, countless reasons, which can vindicate my point of view, I will mention the two most conspicuous ones through the following paragraphs.
The first reason that juts out of my mind easily at the first moment of thinking about this issue is the importance that individuals who are well organized, will be successful in not so distant future. This is due to the fact that these people have some perfect plans for each of their tasks; therefore, they do their duties in a perfect order and achieve their goals in a short time. To give a tangible example, consider a student who has a plan in his lessons and do each of his commitments in the due time. Definitely, he will do his assignments in the best way, and will achieve high grades, and because of these scores he would be able to enroll in a high-ranked university which really will revolutionize his life. As it is clear, being well organized in completely lucrative.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about this importance that people who have plan, use their time more effectively. Actually, they do each of their tasks in a distinguish time; therefore, the amount of stress, which imposes on them is less than other persons and as a result, they are much healthier than others. For instance, a research conducted by some researcher in my country has shown that almost 80 percent of individual who have plans in their lives, are mentally and physically in an excellent condition thanks to the fact that they experience low level of stress. This research has indicated the significant of planning.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, we may draw the conclusion that it can be more advantageous for young adults to have the ability of planning. This contention is due to this importance that this ability not only does lead to a successful life but also well organized people have a better lifestyle. Every individuals should improve this skill in themselves
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ut this importance that people who have plan, use their time more effectively. Actua...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ctually, they do each of their tasks in a distinguish time; therefore, the amount of stress, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85645933014 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79821277507 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2420079315 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.411764706 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1780505475 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576474025409 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058116273267 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121551469206 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036815882621 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.