Today's population explosion has led to the rapid shrinking, even collapse, of private space, but this situation is not healthy for people. Therefore, I advocate alone is the best way of leisure. Based on this argument, here are two points:
First of all, in my humble opinion, stress can be avoided by temporarily avoiding interpersonal communication. Because the primary source of stress is interpersonal communication, competition is one of the best. Peer pressure is a term you are all familiar with. When you are young, you have to compare your study with your work. When you are older, you have to compare your house with your car. Moreover, take me as an example, the college entrance examination is a nightmare for me. This nightmare is not only that "one test will ensure a lifetime", but also that "thousands of soldiers and horses can cross a single-log bridge". My performance is not bad, but other people, such a sense of powerlessness often make me toss and turn sleepless. But as long as we can't live without this civilization, competition is inevitable. What we can do is to escape for a moment, find the meaning of our existence in the time alone, and lick the wounds at the center of human interaction.
Second, solitude and sociability together constitute the essence of being human. People live in groups, but it is also undeniable that solitude is an indispensable part of everyone's life. As the saying goes: Every man is an island, which deeply reveals the existence of a forbidden place in the heart of every man. Leaving the island of self, we will eventually become headless flies, forget the original intention, lost the home, but in daily life, we always because of busy and ignore the voice from the inside. Therefore, I think that we should return to the island after work and study, and enjoy the pleasure brought by the sunshine in the silence of the desert island, which is irreplaceable by anything.
Above all, solitude is our summer retreat, shielding us from the searing social sun; Solitude is the hoe to reclaim the desert island of the heart, to help us harvest the abundance of spirit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 785, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s and turn sleepless. But as long as we cant live without this civilization, competi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94520547945 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89150274777 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2184138281 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.277777778 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107717794256 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375278616004 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545085908298 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498398109012 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531686764623 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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