truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
According to the bible, we should give our life to keep up the truth. I personally agree with the statement that truth should be maintained in one's life in all prospects. I feel this way for 2 reasons which I will expound in the following paragraphs.
I have a thought in my mind that truth plays a crucial role, especially in a mutual relationship in married life. Every couple promised in front of god and in the midst of their parents to be united forever. But due to various reasons, this bond is ruined. The main culprit in this is mistrust. My brother's life is a compelling example of this. They got married 9 years ago and they had 3 sons. His wife, however, after 9 years of loyal married life left him and their 3 sons and planned to live his boyfriend she met through social media. This story came to a tragic end because she realized that her new friend is cheating her for money. Even though she tried to persuade my brother's life, he never accepts her. This shows the importance of trust and loyalty in married life.
Secondly, I think trust is a key factor in a relationship with doctors and their patients. As a dentist, I can assure it by explaining an example from my professional life. Once a patient approaches me to fabricate teeth set for her posteriors. I dealt with her with my full professionalism and she was impressed with my work and character. She used to tell me that she always trust me while she opens her mouth. That gave me confidence and support for my job. Eventually, she became my regular patient and I became their family dentist. I can firmly say that if your patient's trust a doctor, the outcome will be pervasive for your career.
In conclusion, I think trustworthiness is the character one should follow in their personal as well as professional relationships. That can pave the path for a better life and a good human being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ment that truth should be maintained in ones life in all prospects. I feel this way ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...expound in the following paragraphs. I have a thought in my mind that truth pl...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'paves'.
Suggestion: paves
...as professional relationships. That can pave the path for a better life and a good h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54867256637 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70078611004 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5066243459 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0434782609 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7391304348 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577909880323 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170427218664 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299498383588 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328079907953 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200989063779 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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