Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Car manufacture is a big business network in the world. However, the surge of motor vehicles in every country leads to a drastic change in the ecosystem. I believe, hike in cars will be increased to its upmost in 20 years. I think like this because of a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, the lifestyle and affordability of people along with the population rise are the
2 crucial factors that foster pollution. Human beings became the ultimate consumers in the ecosystem. Therefore they will do anything to enhance their living. This trend will never decline, instead, it is ameliorating each day. If we look at our surroundings we can appreciate that. For instance, I can explain this in my personal life. I live in my beautiful street for the past 20 years. My neighbors and relatives are living in this street for many years. So I know each family in my living hood. If I inspect each family of my street I can assert that day by day they try to live better. 20 years back they had a single vehicle in their garage, but as the number of individuals in each family increased, the number of cars also increased. From this example, I can assure that size of the population and affordability is directly proportional to the number of cars. In other words, when population and lifestyle modification improves, the hipe in car numbers also occurs.

Secondly, According to the survey in 1960, the pollution harnessing the ecosystem was due to the emissions from cars. In this study, they selected a particular area and analyzed the stratosphere, which is the second layer of the atmosphere to see the changes in the ozone layer. This layer can prevent harmful UV rays from the Sun to reach Earth. The researchers proposed that in a span of just 2 years the number of cars in the selected area increased and inturn caused indelible holes in the ozone layer, that cannot be obtainable. Therefore, in 2020, we can imagine the effects of cars over the ozone layer which can cause skin cancer and other fatal diseases in humans. If people share cars for traveling and use public transportation, this problem can be eliminated. Moreover, the government should build high occupancy vehicle (HOV) lanes in all the highways to reduce the number of cars with a single individual.

To conclude, I strongly believe that the number of cars will increase in the nearby future as the living quality is improved as per surveys they are proved. If we never open our eyes to the after-effects of car surge, our future generation will suffer.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o I know each family in my living hood. If I inspect each family of my street I ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75669642857 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70987566873 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511160714286 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4381513282 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9615384615 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80769230769 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1274386637 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355282297005 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376628728263 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794903875216 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258696534848 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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