From the dawn of civilization to modern times, transportation played crucial role in each society. A controversial question, recently raised about, cars will be more in the futures. There are many inventions which deserve to write some word but cars is critical and permanent than the others. I believe that the depend on vehicle will be more. I have several reasons such as transportation, environment friends cars and technologies.
First of all, the foremost reasons coming to my mind id that transportation. Firms which aim to attain their goal, use cars as a trade tools. This is mean, without cars world trade is nothing. Moreover, the population of World has skyrocketed compared to last decades. So, new population is the other name is extra consume. Hence, the need of using car will be more than expecting.
Secondly, another imperative reason to deserve some word to say is environment friends car with another word is green cars. The global warming has been had devastating effect on our mother nature. The government force companies to find nature friends solutions which do not harm nature . Furthermore, they decrease tax on development research. Even today there are many cars which work by electricity power.
Last but not least, last reason is increasing literacy rate. According to a research study conducted at MIT, by reputable team of scientist,(at MIT), it was found the car accident have correlation with literacy rate. The more educated driver is the less car accident. Since, literacy rate increased, car accident has dropped compared last decades. Although, driving car has some risk, people find the way which overcome and they are more aware of risks.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons which can be persuasive enough to corroborate my view. Having analyzed the reasons above, one can conclude the need of cars are still significant. I highly recommend that government should look for more nature friends way. I believe that every country should find innovative solution to this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79675231714 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6717976645 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.16 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.12 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223995974591 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634545127209 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854961579808 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124776751229 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728872639065 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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