In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Qulity of life of the people is inceaseing day by day. Therefor people will search for new technology each time. As result of it lot of new models of car have ariver to the market. Personally I belive that in twenty years there will be more cas than today. I feel this way for two main resons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, every one like to have their own car. The new technology was able to built new car for cheeper price. My own experions is a compelling example of this. My uncle works in a privat company for 25 years and he didn't have a car. But recently he bought a new car. So I asked him that when you were young you didn't buy a car, but now you have bought a one. He told me that now a days there are cas for cheeper price with all the opptions on it. There for lot of people are able to buy new car.
Secondly, The bussy lifestyles make people to use more cas. Because there may be instances differant family members going for diffrent directions for get their jobs done. For instant, One of my father's friend who is an docter. Once we invited his family our home for a dinner. That doctor came in his car and his wife and childrens came in his wifes car. I asked him why didn't you come in a single vehicale instaed of two. He replyed I came directly form the hospital which is faw away from my home and my wife went take children from tution.
In conclution, I strongly believe that the number of car in twenty years will be highre than today. This is because of the new technology allows people to make good car for cheeper price and bussy life styles make people to use more cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, as for, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19303797468 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10270225037 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3483173028 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2272727273 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254961428267 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082535220549 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133163180349 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197417742783 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119577064114 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 11.7677419355 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 10.9000537634 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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