In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
The prompt says that in the future there will be no many cars in use like nowadays. Personally, I agree. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will examine in the following essay.
First of all, to achieve decrease in car usage, it should be there is other alternatives to use. If we look at the past, there were not any transportaions like cars, trains, and airplanes but horses and camels. Therefore, logically to feel this way in the future. As there is massive development and progress in the transportation means technology, it is expected to have small flying cars or bicycles. This is best demonestrated example, Tesla, the auto drive cars,few decades ago, we cannot imagine that one day we have a car doesn't need for a driver, however, here it is. As time passes, probably they invent a flying viechle instead of cars.
Secondly, as there is a global trend to reduce a traffic to reduce the traffic itself and the car's emissions. Thus, I believe that will be many solutions to reduce the number of cars on the roads. For example, nowadays in the big cities where the tourists go like Dubai; they do water sports with an invention called a motor flight. This flight pushes up the person to make him flies. Surprisingly, that fly has a good public reputation. Thus, there are many of manufacturers are working now to develop it into a commercial daily viechles, and consequently, will shrink the car numbers.
In conclusion, I am of opinion that in the future using cars gradually will minimized. This is because there are many innovative methods regarding the transportations means,and as a corollary, will be other versions will be used instead. Moreover, as there is an worldwide aim to reduce the detrimental effects of using cars whether to reduce the traffic or the emissions, that will encourage many manufactuerer to reproduce an existence version of entertaining veichles into commercial one. Therefore, based on the above two reasons, the number of cars will diminish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...t says that in the future there will be no many cars in use like nowadays. Persona...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are other alternatives'?
Suggestion: there are other alternatives
...eve decrease in car usage, it should be there is other alternatives to use. If we look at the past, there w...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , few
...ated example, Tesla, the auto drive cars,few decades ago, we cannot imagine that one...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nnot imagine that one day we have a car doesnt need for a driver, however, here it is....
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
Suggestion: traffic
...y, as there is a global trend to reduce a traffic to reduce the traffic itself and the ca...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'minimize'
Suggestion: minimize
...in the future using cars gradually will minimized. This is because there are many innovat...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'transportations'' or 'transportation's'?
Suggestion: transportations'; transportation's
...e many innovative methods regarding the transportations means,and as a corollary, will be other...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...hods regarding the transportations means,and as a corollary, will be other versions ...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... be used instead. Moreover, as there is an worldwide aim to reduce the detrimental...
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Line 7, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sons, the number of cars will diminish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87352941176 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85744792613 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3423632605 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25688330847 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819260716064 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856547983549 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173334129798 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711929195749 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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