To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Undoubtedly, if one wants to know about any society’s culture should look at its cities. The prompt says that the major cities are the place where one can find out more about society. However, I strongly disagree, because always these big cities do not show the real life of those societies. There are more than reasons to not look at big cities if you want to know more about any community.
Firstly, major cities in most countries full of diversities to be able to attract tourists from around the world. Thus, it does not show the fact of society itself. For example, in Las Vegas in USA, this city has plenty of hotels where are Gambling Holes and Brothels. As well as, it is considered one of the most cities which has a high rate of crimes, suicide, alcohol consumption, and illicit use of drugs. Of course, these places do not reflect the real-life of Americans. Quite the opposite, if one goes to any small city such as Virginia; Virginia is a little historic nugget where are many places which talk about history for the city itself and the whole continent. Virginia is famous for Comstock Lode; it is a booming establishment for several decades in the mid-1800s. Besides, this small city is full of arts and cultures which gravitate tourists since 150 years ago to visit the museums scattered throughout the area. Therefore, the small cities the best places can help one to identify the culture and the reality of the societies.
Further, small cities provide a picture of society’s industries. For example, in Eygpt, if one needs to see what kind of industry is in the country; he should go to small cities where the agricultures and handcrafts can be found. Small cities like Monufya or Sharkya in Eygpt are famous for grains’manufactories where most people of these cities work in farms. Thus, one can find out about the kind of industries and the nature of the cities’ people who live in the suburbs, especially in rustic areas where no pollution, whether environmental or even cultural. For example, if one goes to a well-known big city in Eygpt such as Cairo; this city is full of brands shopping’ stores and restaurants which undoubtedly do not refer to the real life of Eygpt at all. For this reason, rural cities are the places where one can study more about the country and the essence of the city’s culture, and the local industries, and further how their population look like.
In conclusion, major cities are an excellent destination for tourists to have fun, but in case one needs to discover the essence of any society should visit such small towns where can find the real life of the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7385620915 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61777557149 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479302832244 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7407277792 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242826326464 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861347188466 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466664183857 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162780711618 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206477874126 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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