In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Agree or Disagree

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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Agree or Disagree.

Some people believe we will have fewer cars in twenty next years. In my opinion, the count of vehicles will decrease during the twenty next years. In order to the behavior of people and the way of technology, we can consider two main reasons for this issue.
The first reason is that technology has been progressing, and we have seen the impact of this progress. Nowadays, manufactories and scientific institutions have been trying to produce new vehicles for transportation. Due to the traffic and population of cities, manufactories are trying to provide faster and easier machines to use people. Hence, inventors are working on some project about fly-cars that use new and fast technology. For example, some years ago I read an article about new cars in the future in a scientific magazine. It said that some inventors and companies want to permit the new vehicle that the name was fly-car. It said this car could be move as fast as an airplane. Moreover, it mentioned that some factories decrease their products and focus on the project the same as fly-car.
The second reason is the potential for transportation. Despite the promotion of public transport, these days, most people prefer to use their car Using cars will decline if improving the transportation industry. On the other hand, most governments are facing an enormous challenge in traffic and pollution in their countries. They are cooperating with some producers to make a new vehicle that will be faster and safer. For example, we can refer to the first ages of the high-speed train in the world. People have using the high-speed train instead of their cars. So I am sure that will decrease the count of vehicles in cities, and people will start to use the modern vehicle for transporting. As a result, the pattern of people's behavior towards the use of new cars that will be faster and more convenient than old cars will change the number of vehicles in the future. Also, the traffic and pollution as two significant global issues are challenging to the governments. They should find a solution to these issues, such as producing a new vehicle with low pollution and high speed that will decrease the number of cars.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that will decrease the number of cars.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87667560322 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72520865504 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466487935657 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5564497973 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.619047619 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243881330099 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725422300495 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762476385833 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160691133459 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350247429314 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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