Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, some people think that they are doing few things well because they are doing many different things. I agree with this assertion and I will illustrate my two main reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, when we do a lot of works we divide our concentration on different things that need our whole concentration and If we do not a piece of work without our whole focus , we will not do that well. As a matter of fact, for doing a work as well as we can, we must use our maximum power and focus on doing something well. As we know, each work needs enough time to do and we should consider this factor in our point veiws to this assertion that spending enough time is an essential point in this matter. For example, when my wife goes to work, I am in charge of the house and our baby. I must do different works until my wife comes home. I do dishes, care baby, clean rooms, make foods and do my project for company. All the time, I can not do all these works well because some of them are so energic and need more attention such as taking care of the baby. I must not forget to let alone baby in the kitchen because she might touch oven or other dangerous things.
Secondly, nowadays, people do not have enough time to do different things well and they are doing their works according to their priorities. They divide their works according to their importance People spend time and energy doing some of their works more than others. For instance, when we must do our research for our professors, make food, call our friends, go to parties and things like We select our works according to our priorities and we might do some of them well.
In sum, we can not do different things equal concentration and power. Therefore, we will do some of them well. Also, people do their works according to their priorities and it is it deopends on that which works are more important than others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... few things well because they are doing many different things. I agree with this assertion and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in reasons in the following paragraphs. Firstly, when we do a lot of works we di...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a piece of work without our whole focus , we will not do that well. As a matter o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... according to their priorities and it is it deopends on that which works are more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40455840456 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34672160103 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433048433048 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.468040235 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321421564806 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148219379626 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11149834553 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27561881856 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968889946263 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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