Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
In this progressive and sophisticated world, traveling with a group led by a tour guide is a common debate among people who travel a lot. In my opinion, being a tour guide is useful and essential for having a good trip. I will illustrate my fundamental reasons in this following.
Firstly, traveling with a group helps us learn some important concepts, such as a corporation, patience, and helper. Actually, this a good practice for learning these essential concepts that we need in our lives. Sometimes on a trip, we are in a dangerous situation that cannot solve it without others' help. Being a group is very helpful and hopeful. Traveling with a group with a tour guide helps us know with a new place where we have not been there before, and a tour guide prepares us to face new things and new experiences. A tour guide is like a live map, and having a map is essential for a group that goes to travel. For example, my friend and I decided to go travel with a group to the desert. We have never gone there before, and we were so excited. Our tour guide emphasizes that having appropriate shoes with you. The desert was so sandy, and moving was so hard. If we went there without a group and a tour guide who had many experiences about going to the desert, we would have a terrible experience.
Secondly, being a tour guide who has power's leadership in a group of travelers is essential because a leader must lead some people with different tastes and ideas. Also, a tour guide can keep all the members by some rules legislated before.
If there is no leader in a group, there will be many discrepancies, and nobody cannot enjoy the trip. For instance, you are a busy man who decides to travel and spend a lot of money to do this work, but you go to travel with a group of new people you have not known them before and have many differences with you. It is challenging for you because you must be patient and cope with this new situation, but if there is a leader in your group, he will not generate any discrepancies.
In sum, being a tour guide who has many experiences about a new place in a group is helpful because he helps all members prepare for new challenges that might face them on a trip. Also, a tour guide with leadership's power does not allow anybody to break the laws' group. In the end, traveling with a group with a tour guide is the right choice for all people who have not had any experience with a new place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38410596026 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52295766144 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426048565121 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7575291148 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332830292746 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118415360377 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885362571196 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221018753862 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182982523068 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.