What are some important qualities of a good supervisor(boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important?
The companies do not work only for earning money but they also work for success on their business sector. Altough success is possible for a company thank to its employers, manager of the company absulately has a crucial role on this success. Another words, a good boss is like a cornerstone for the company. I believe that a successfull boss is supposed to have some crucial charecteristics such as being friendly, hardworking and familiar to teamwork.
Firstly, for a boss who is friendly and kind to employers, it is always easy to have a good communication with employers. It is well established that, actually this is a general statement for all people. A friendly boss is not just a boss for the employers, but he is a close friend to them as well. Therefore employers perform their work more comfortablely and this brings confidence to work which is done. Eventually, being friendly turns out as success on the work.
The second point i would like to make is that one of the most important quality of a boss is being hardworking. A boss whose destination is success, initially must work hard himself. Because employers of him don’t appreciate if the boss is not able to do a work.Therefore this causes a decrease on their performance. Morever, a hardworking boss is a quite significant role model for the employers. Motivation of them is affected considerably because of a hardworking boss then success, inherently enhances.
Finally, and actually most importantly, team work has a crucial role for being a good boss. If the boss is eager to work in a team and is a succesfull organizer, then efficiency of the output of work increase slightly. In other words, employers can follow a way which their bosses determine for themselves. However efficiency drops off since they work individually. I infer from that a succesfull boss need to be a real teammate and leader for his employers. Therefore success
comes through naturally.
All in all, a good boss is a key factor for the success. However to be successful, there is a path which is needed to be followed. A good boss is supposed to be friendly against to his employers. He must also be a hardworking employer for his company. Besides he must be eager to work with teammates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85233160622 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02272549964 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458549222798 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0683057642 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.92 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.44 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107565844582 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380095521176 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445006684181 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592394852764 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400879970451 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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