Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Job is, absulately, one of the most crucial factors in a person’s life. However, I don’t believe that it only provides money for life to person working. Therefore, I totally disagree with the statement of that money is the most significant aspect of a job as friends you work with, are effective, money doesn’t always supply happiness and career desire is important for quite many employees.
Initially, people always want someone to be with. Inherently, this is for having enjoy from life, supply motivation to eachother as it is permanent for the job they work. They spend approximately one third of the day for working. Therefore, while working, having pleased time in the office would be important. I infer from that without friends, working just for money must be abysmal. When we compare with earning a lot of money and working with friends and having quite much fun, then I believe that many people prefer to work with friends to have fun instead of boring working for hours even it provides some amount of money to the employee working hard.
While a worker is working, first he or she must established that whether he or she is working for money or having a pleased life. It is well believed that we need to work hard and spend a lot of time to earn to much money. However, spending money we earn is possible then because we don’t have enough time to enjoy and search for stuffs that is worth to time we spent. On the other hand, if the happiness is the cornerstone of our life, we can access it with small amount of money. For instance, my father’s works are really tough. He sometimes work until 12 pm. At the same time, he earns quite much money. We have apartments and cars. However, since he doesn’t have enough time, I don’t remember that he suffer to be happy throughout his life by going out with us or spending time with a hobby he has. It would be better if he has more time and less money but he is happier than now. Therefore, job is not only important for money that it supplies, but it is crucial for happiness by balancing the outputs as well.
Moreover, certain amount of employees work for a successful career life. For many of them, money is in the second position. They prefer to be successful instead of working hard to earning money by doing a work they don’t want to do. Therefore, it is clear that money is less important than career desire and future plans that career supplies.
On the whole, job is quite importance for a person’s life. It provides some crucial factors to worker’s life. Eventually, for all intents and purposes, money has an important role while it is not more important than happiness, career desire and having funny friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, for instance, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60311978958 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422916666667 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5352062469 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15171201229 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515385636584 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572323004111 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120312284125 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738189964522 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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