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Essay topics:

what is the most effective way of getting information about a job of interest?
asking friends- sending a letter to companies - searching on job advertisements

There is no doubt that job and career play a major role in people's life. So it is crucial to get precise information about it. Some people believe that getting broader information about a specific job is better done by direct contact with the company. Personally, I believe it is better to ask a friend. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

First and foremost, A friend can give an honest opinion, without being obliged to please the company or the recruitment services. As a good friend, he must always give real feedback about anything. For example, Last year I applied for a job as a dental assistant, where my friend Rana is working. So, I asked her about the work environment in the dental clinic. She was honest and told me how the clinic manager treated all staff. He was an arrogant and very obnoxious person. For that reason, I decided not to work there. Especially I am a sensitive person and this kind of negative vibe can affect me easily. That is why asking a true friend can save you from future troubles.

second, by asking a friend you get to save you time and energy. Usually, the formal process takes a long time to be completed as people might not be working the whole week. for instance, back to my previous example of applying to the job. I remember I had some questions regarding the salary and the insurance benefits. Therefore, I sent the clinic emails in order to find some answers. Unfortunately, a few of my emails were ignored, and the others took a really long time to reply back. In contrast, I called my friend Rana and she answers all my inquiries within no time. And I wish I just called her before sending all those emails and had the bad feeling of being ignored by the clinic. It's with no doubt more convenient to just go directly and ask her.

To sum up, I strongly believe that asking a friend is the best way to get information about a job of interest. because a friend can give an honest review with detailed facts. not only this, but also it is easier to obtain knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...he company or the recruitment services. Its his duty as a good friend to always giv...
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...I decided not to work there. Especially Im a sensitive person and this kind of neg...
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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Suggestion: Because
...et information about a job of interest. because a friend can give an honest review with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.504 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45142534502 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554666666667 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8875571086 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.9615384615 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4230769231 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249824166462 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648009151728 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846042281658 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176227870147 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073715292292 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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