Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today ?
The world is going through a massive revolution. Especially when it comes to technology, everyone is trying to keep up with this fast thriving. So personally, I am afraid to disagree with this statement. In fact, the number of cars will increase dramatically in the upcoming years. I feel this for several reasons.
To begin with, people are taking advantage of the fierce competition between cars company in the market these days. For example, Hyundai a well-known worldwide Korean vichels company. It is taking over the market with its excellent features compared to its fair prices. On the other hand, Toyota, a famous Japanese company following the same strategy. And the most benefited here is the consumer, where there’s the availability of cars with reasonable prices. So people will keep buying.
Secondly, one significant factor that plays a vital role in elevating car numbers is the benefits you get in return. To illustrate more, I will give a compelling example of this. Recently, the US government has announced that anyone buying an environmentally friendly car, like Tesla or any other electric vehicle, Will get an outstanding tax to return at the end of the year. The government is doing this In order to promote saving the environment from pollution and decrease fossil fuels consumption in the country, which is a very tempting offer to receive.
In addition, it is very trendy these days for every family member to have their own car, unlike old days where people used to share cars. The new generation of teenagers has a different thought about this when it comes to sharing cars, so parents get a vehicle for each.
In summary, cars have become an essential part of human lives, especially with the massive industrial revolution and urbanization. That expanded the borders of cities, which eventually made it hard for individuals to move around without cars. So surely people will never stop buying new cars, and car numbers will keep growing in the next twenty years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 234, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[6]
Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'buy'.
Suggestion: buy
...US government has announced that anyone buying an environmentally friendly car, like T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in fact, in summary, i am afraid, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72095170264 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8229391986 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206949936394 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542982312948 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043165389313 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102307507781 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321261763634 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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