Everyone has different problems and different approaches to solve their problem. When it comes to deal with any problem, some people like to solve it on their own while others prefer to discuss it with their relatives or friends. I always do prefer to discuss my problem with my friends and family to get a meaningful solution. I prefer this approach for two reasons which I am going to discuss in the ensuing paragraph.
First of all, discussing your problem with friends and family helps to release all stress and make us feel confident and secure. We always discuss our problem with those who we really trust. My own experience is a good example of this. Back to my school days, my maths study was faltering which led me into a dilemma. I discussed my situation with a friend who went through the same situation before. He suggested me to analyse my problem meticulously and to find out my strengths and weaknesses. I worked according to her advice which worked wonderfully and also helped me to get full marks in maths.
Secondly, It is prudent to discuss your problem with someone who already experienced that. In that case our seniors and elder persons could be helpful. I want to demonstrate this idea with a vivid example. After my high school, I found difficulty to select college for my undergraduate study. Hence, I decided to ask a senior. My senior provided all the information about dormitories, campus, laboratories and fees structure which helped me to find suitable college.
In conclusion, it is always prudent to discuss your problem with others which help you to take a decision confidently and fearlessly. Because sometimes we cannot perceive a situation when we meet a dilemma. But with taking help from others helps us to go through that easily and expeditiously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a decision confidently and fearlessly. Because sometimes we cannot perceive a situatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85620915033 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75180475461 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3593066456 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115311929676 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384626485382 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460994165375 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763720744593 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113679730119 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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