When a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away; others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Using technology and being aware of last-update methods are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact we live in a chaotic and fast-paced world, it is necessary for us to use last technological devices that will help us to have better lives. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether people should buy new technological devices as soon as they publish or whether they should wait until they are adopted. Some people possess the conviction that the former is more agreeable whereas I think the second approach is more beneficial for us. To substantiate my point of view the following paragraphs will represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that new technological devices are the first period that they release, are expensive. There are many requisites and demands for them and all of the fans’s around the world, counting the day to buy and use them. Thus, buying and using these devices at a high price is not an economical decision and it will bring us neglect. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. When Apple introduces its new iPhone series, it has high prices and due to the dollar exchange, it is not affordable for some people to buy and use it. Thus, it is not wise to buy products as soon as they release.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that new technological devices will have some features that make these devices remarkable from other devices but, these features can have some drawbacks, and not all people around the world can use them. In particular, some of these devices have some dysfunctions that reveal after several times. Consider the Samsung Note 7’s that was popular among people around the world, but after using several month, it exposed. This product had spesific batteries. Thus, it is not beneficial for people to use new devices at first.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, it is more beneficial for people to wait until new technological devices are adopted and use them because it is more beneficial and economical and all people will able to use them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...any requisites and demands for them and all of the fans’s around the world, counting the d...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'several months'.
Suggestion: several months
...eople around the world, but after using several month, it exposed. This product had spesific ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, i think, in brief, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89947089947 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66311596986 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465608465608 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1965233245 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.941176471 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272217957264 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859585519633 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580753690341 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181727378166 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024487906018 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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