The school is a place where students learn many things apart from formal education imparted to them. A child comes across many activities that become his/her area of interest such as drawing, music, sports etc.. If the school does not have enough budget or lacks the proper number of teachers then I believe that physical education classes should be removed first from the curriculum of the students rather then eliminating music and art classes. There are reasons to this which I would like explore in the essay.
First, I believe that physical education classes are not very necessary to be part of the time-table of the students. The reason to this is children don't need any classes to do exercise as they already play a lot after going home from the school. I would like to explain this with the help of an example. I have younger cousins who always prefer playing outside over doing some art work at home. They do cycling, swimming or playing games with their friends. All kids have penchant towards doing outdoor activities or playing games. Thus, it can be said that the physical education classes can be removed.
Secondly, I think that children need proper guidance in courses like art and music. In contrary, same may not be true with physical education. They cannot prepare for art or music on their own as there should be someone who can teach them how to practice it. Moreover, the classes for art or music can be costly outside which may not be afforded by every parent. A child who is good in singing might not be able to develop the skills properly as the classes are not available in the school and he cannot afford them on his own. Thus, these classes should be available in the school.
Lastly, I would like to say that if school does not have courses like arts children may never know that they interest in these things. They will not be able to develop liking towards such activities. Their talent will remain dormant due to lack of knowledge about these activities as school is the first place where children come to know about their liking or disliking with the aid of such courses.
To sum up, the physical education classes should be dropped instead of art and music classes if the school is lacking in funding or teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, apart from, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68090452261 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26044232509 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482412060302 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2540295706 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7142857143 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387959274363 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117759881227 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088583233903 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230860737879 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876050890426 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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