when was it easier to identify what career leads to a successful career
whether a job identifies as successful or not depends on the lens through which one is looking. While some may consider high salaries and job stability as successful, others might believe that a career which provides a supporting environment for each individual's specific talents to flourish is the more beneficial choice. All that said, I believe, there's more opportunity for people to obtain safe and satisfying career options. I will demonstrate my ideas as follows.
Firstly, although certain types of jobs were guaranteed to paint a bright picture of the future for people in the past, today with the growth of the population and development of technology, there are innumerable occupation options which present individuals with promising and successful futures. For instance, in the past most people dreamt of becoming a doctor or an engineer due to their social status and high-paying jobs. Imagine a child whose talent was not in biology or mathematics subjects, but in arts and drawing. Today, that child has an equal chance in success as as graphic designer, illustrator, and many other creative jobs.
Secondly, with great developments in various branches of science, the human kind now can handle natural obstacles and limitations more adequately. Ceassions of global wars, higher control over diseases and health systems, advanced technologies in energy production, and many other developments in science have collectively contributed to the enhancement of economic conditions in most countries. Therefore, this financial and political advances have caused more job security and better quality of life overall. In other words, the advantages like high salaries and health benefits that used to come with critical-condition jobs, now are attainable by almost everyone in the community. Hence, people can make their career choice based on talent and preferance and still be successful. For example, a professional dancer could be as proficient and successful today as a dentist. Moreover, due to availability of the internet and social media, there is countless ways for a person to further develop their knowledge about their jobs and grow in their field every day.
In conclusion, population growth, availability of technology, and also financial, social and political advances in the countries have led to more options in a successful and safe career today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43513513514 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00944337912 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8392633142 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6875 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 5.45110844103 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122694704763 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412337358621 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430421021452 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881316561378 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421903466122 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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