When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
- asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
- finding information about the problem using the Internet
- taking a long time to think about the problem
problems are part of our daily life, one needs to always find an efficient way to resolve it. There can be a number of ways to resolve the problem, it depends on us which method we consider useful. In my opinion, taking advice from an experienced person is the best option. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
most of the situation in we are stuck in are not unique, someone had been in that same situation earlier. this makes asking for help from our seniors as the optimal solution. As a result, they can provide us with the step they had taken when they were also stuck previously, and advice us that their step is good for us. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. To recall, my brother, when he completed his schooling, he was overwhelmed by the career choices he can make. this made him vacillate between different options, and therefore unable to come at a single choice. being confused, he approached me, as an elder brother I adviced him to first, find his area of interest and then look for the course curriculum and if, it matches with your interest, go for it. The advice given by me turns out to be beneficial for my brother as within a week he was able to come up with his desired course to opt for. therefore, I believe asking help from senior is the best way to come out of the problem we are facing.
most of us think that teacher can be found in school only, however they forget the notion that teacher can be found anywhere. they can be our parents, relatives etc. willing to help us and guide us during the time of hardships as they are more experienced than us and a suitable candidate to advice us. For instance, I found my teacher in my father, back when I was in college, being embroiled in number of events I was not able to give time for my studies. As a result, my grades started plummeting. during that time, I told my father the reason behind my decreasing grades, he being gone through same situation guided me to, take part in only one event at a time rather than turning avid at approving all the events. I followed his suggestion and was able to balance my grades and my participation with brilliance. if my father had not advised me at that time, I would have been unaware for my reasons of performing badly in academics.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that best suggestion can be taken from an experienced person only. this is because he has gone through the same phase and because he is the best candidate to guide us .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42735042735 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47586262831 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482905982906 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2866266114 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0869565217 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138412161461 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455915973273 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374702688346 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096125265773 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058276006942 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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