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When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?

Problems, as we all know, are inseparable parts of human beings’ life. Due to the paramount importance of problems in humans’ life, effort for reducing their effectiveness have always been among the top priorities of experts. In this regard, many try to find a practical solution for when one faces difficult problems. In my opinion, the best ways are consulting and making mind free. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.

The first reason that makes me hold the belief that consulting is a critical way for solving issues is related to the humans’ nature. Undoubtedly, people are born with a natural instinct to live in community, believe that most of the problem could be solved with the help of coterie. Although many critics may challenge this idea and debate that a person should tackle with their problem without help, an increasing number of shreds of evidence show otherwise. On the other hand, based on a common belief, “the collective mind is more than the collection of single minds”, so a person can find the best solution among their relationships. Take my personal experience as an example. A couple of years ago, I was in high school and I had a big problem with math, and It had continued for several years so that it became a difficult one. I remember the time I consulted with one of my close friends. She proposed a group she knew. Surprisingly, just a notification from my friend led me to the right path to solve the big problem. What would have happened if I had never told her the problem? Needless to say, perhaps I would have it for more years.

Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is helping mind to ease the problem from very beginning stages. Without a doubt, one of the aspects of any problem had rooted in mind. In other words, the difficulty of an issue directly depends on a person mind organization. If a person be an easy going one the difficulty of problem show less. The stricter mind a person has, the more difficulty one feels. Scientifically speaking, people have two ways for dealing with issues, as a whole. One either put the problem on mind process and routinely think about it or set the brain free from any further thinking, and let the time solve it. Neither the first one nor the second is favorable. Based on psychologists, people who try to have a kind of balance between these two moods are successful. In other meaning, experts provide people with the best solution. Indeed, the best way for solving time consuming and difficult problems is the combination of the mind and the body. In fact, individuals who try to know the problem, and let the mind do its process without any pressure then focus on physical exercising to reduce the pressure of overthinking have the best solution. Thus, one should reduce overthinking especially during solving difficult issues to help mind to be free to solve it in a best way.

To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that both consulting and helping mind are practical ways in facing difficult problems.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd I had a big problem with math, and It had continued for several years so that ...
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... had continued for several years so that it became a difficult one. I remember th...
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...e either put the problem on mind process and routinely think about it or set the ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind being'.
Suggestion: mind being
...during solving difficult issues to help mind to be free to solve it in a best way. To s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, thus, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79737335835 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72337941552 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499061913696 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2700661463 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195533104823 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523708447982 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523935661258 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126378410967 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020665807791 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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